The Old Castle - By Annika

Drifting up the old brick stairs I could hear the bricks falling out of place and I could see the birds in the sky circling me. I saw a door, it was very old and dusty covered in spider webs. As I walked along through the castle I could smell the fresh cold air. I stumble down the long hallway as I feel the rusty wall as I breath, steam come out of my mouth. It was freezing in there. I could see a dim light.

I followed it into a room and the door slammed shut. I screamed as I felt something breathing on my neck as I had shivers ran down my back. I tried to open up the door but it was locked. I found a pitch black corridor I ran through it and ended outside at a carnival. I walked down this long road and at the end of it was a river and a lot of grass with rocks all around the place. I was searching for a way to get out of this horrid castle for a minute or two I was running then I got tired so I sat down. A door opened right in front of my eyes. I was thinking to myself why did I not see that door before?